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Old 08-04-2012, 06:29 PM   #61
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The anatomy is fantastic! Loves the veins.

The folds on the back of the shoulder looks a little unnatural, you may want to relook again. Teeth and gum look really good as well.
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Old 08-04-2012, 06:59 PM   #62
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The anatomy is fantastic! Loves the veins.

The folds on the back of the shoulder looks a little unnatural, you may want to relook again. Teeth and gum look really good as well.

Thanks man! I will look into that, I already see what you mean, thank you.
 
Old 09-12-2012, 07:45 PM   #63
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I made a qyuck overpaint, as I want to correct the face.
 
Old 09-14-2012, 11:16 AM   #64
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Further refining Peter.
 
Old 09-14-2012, 09:19 PM   #65
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very good! just missing a big gun.
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Old 09-15-2012, 09:16 AM   #66
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Just a question. Is there a real need to model the manhood?

Anyway, I notice in this model, as well as the Asia girl, that your fingers have this fins in between, like a frog or something. You may want to look into this.

Otherwise, nothing to critics. Looking really good.
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very good! just missing a big gun.


Peter is model (correct me if I am wrong) like a typical Greek mythical hero, big muscle & a more 'modest' manhood. I do not see a problem.

Oh, wait, this is not what you referring right?

Anyway, on a serious note, tactical force do not typically carry big guns, in urban warfare at least. Something teh size of an M4 or MP3 is more suitable in my view.
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Old 09-26-2012, 11:15 AM   #68
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Just a question. Is there a real need to model the manhood?

Anyway, I notice in this model, as well as the Asia girl, that your fingers have this fins in between, like a frog or something. You may want to look into this.

Otherwise, nothing to critics. Looking really good.


Thank you for your attention and help (and others too)! I perhaps will make him in underpants, as I want to show anatomy and yet I dislike the idea of naked characters in portfolio (well, it's a it edgy).
I agree with you about the fingers, I'm trying to correct it.
I want to make him not completely realistic in a sense I want him to be a bit exaggerated (a bit like sculpture), like his nose bones for example, and the general superhero body type. Maybe just a bit of exaggeration.

I softened a bit the face, making him look more like human. Then small tweaks here and there.




I will add small wrinkles soon.
 
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Just a small update. Perhaps the nostrils could be softer between the transition with the nose.



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Old 04-07-2013, 11:48 PM   #70
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Just playing in PS. I need to get back to drawing humans and research it more, as I feel I move nowhere. I need more research and drawing from live people.
 
Old 04-10-2013, 01:57 PM   #71
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Looking really good man!
Love the anatomy. The only thing I can find is the transition from the pectoral to the deltoid, looks a bit awkward. I reckon you should pump out some head sculpts in zbrush. I am not sure what kind of work you ideally want to make but trying to copy some celebrities is good for your style I think. On the face, try placing your fingers in the corner and outside of you eyes and pull the straight out from your face to see how much of a slant the eye shape has. At the moment the eyes on the model are looking a bit flat from the side and front views.

Great stuff!
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Thanks heaps man! A lot to think about.
 
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