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Old 01-20-2008, 02:18 AM   #1
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MEUuuuuuuUUU

hi,

first test of a new character made tounight.
it will be a full body, textures are not finish for the moment.

Critics are most than welcome.



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Old 01-20-2008, 02:19 AM   #2
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Old 01-20-2008, 02:34 AM   #3
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Wow very nice work!Amazing detail
 
Old 01-20-2008, 03:29 AM   #4
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Interesting

Interesting model. I like it because you can see that there are clearly human features in the model, it's not just an alien with excuses for things to be oddly shaped like, "Oh it was meant to be that way." It shows a really good understanding of human anatomy. (In a good way of course) I absolutely LOVE the eyes. I think they came out really great.

The only thing that looks strange to me, is on the ears, it looks like the textures are stretched a tiny bit. Other than that I'd love to see you texture some veins in those ears, because I see you spent the time to put them in with Zbrush. Bravo though, looking forward to seeing the rest of the model.
 
Old 01-20-2008, 03:32 AM   #5
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Fantastic! A really believable and engaging character
 
Old 01-20-2008, 05:05 AM   #6
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Indeed This is very nice. Keep it up. The eyes feel very natural.
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Old 01-20-2008, 02:01 PM   #7
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Is this boogger ???
 
Old 01-20-2008, 05:26 PM   #8
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yzdyzdyzdyzd1124n thank you !

colarn42, yes the ears nead more work, i will add some veins, fur etc.. and change the structure. thank for you constructive critic !

Mattattattatt, thank you, this is what i am trying to do in this one. putting some life in it .

Brodix, thank you too !

CodeVeroby, yes it is ! slurrrrpp !!

next update at the end of the week. i am working on a video for this "crazy" man :
http://jeangabrielchelala.com/






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Old 01-20-2008, 06:43 PM   #9
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hahahah i really like "" la morve "" coming out of his nose
did you consider to change the size and form of his eyes just a little ..
to reinforce the '' bovine '' aspect ?
 
Old 01-20-2008, 08:09 PM   #10
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Looks Cool Marc ! I would really like to see where you will go with it !
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xtrm3d, thank you my friend , i made some test with the bovine aspect of his eyes, but he loose is human feeling. (en gros mes 1ers tests etais plus dans le style bovin/alien, mais j'avais une tof de michel galabru jeune (si si ca existe) a cot de moi... je ne sais pas, l'inspiration parfois des origines improbables:scream.

gpepper, Thank you too ! me too me too in fact i dont really know where i am going with it, the only thing i know is that he will have a girlfriend. avec un beau sourire et de jolies boucles d'oreilles en forme de boite de fromages.

here is a very little update. first test of fur,more details on ears and face.

sorry for my super bad english.

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Old 01-29-2008, 06:57 AM   #12
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This guy looks very creepy, which means he is very successful. Great work

Lips seem a bit dry to me
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Old 02-02-2008, 02:17 AM   #13
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Thank you Xtitan ! i will correct the lips asap. your wip is great too !

little update. no fur for the moment and mental ray draft mode.


c'est l'heure de la traite !

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Old 02-02-2008, 02:39 AM   #14
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hhahh your vache qui rit .. is really freackish ... i dont know why .. but i can really picture here with a full latex body suite .. and all the toys ,, that go along .. cool
 
Old 02-02-2008, 05:54 AM   #15
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so good! Your work is always brilliant. The skin shader is great, very realistic model and renders.
 
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