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Old 09-20-2013, 08:38 AM   #1
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Godfather / Vito Corleone

This started as a practice bust but I decided to turn it into a full character and want to take it to a high enough standard to include in my portfolio.

The head took some time and allot of comparing to reference but I think it's kind of vaguely in the right ball park. Hopefully the same can be said for the clothing after a few attempts.

Any feedback would be appreciated. Cheers.

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Old 09-22-2013, 09:58 PM   #2
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Hey Paul, really nice work so far!

I was wondering if you have a close up of the head from more perspective?
right now something seems a little off with his forehead and I am not sure if that's only because of the way that it is rotated on the current screenshot you provided.
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Old 09-29-2013, 07:34 PM   #3
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Hey Anne, thanks for the reply. I'm finding it tough to get crits on this one so progress is a little slow! Here's some more angles of the head. I've reworked some of it, including the forehead and general proportions slightly. Chair added and posed.. to some kind of degree at least.

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Old 09-30-2013, 05:43 AM   #4
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I like it very much!

Will you be texturing it as well?

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Thanks. I wasn't intending to go down the texturing road, but if I can get it into a good place I may well do!
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Hi Paul, really nice work any updates?

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Mostly just cleanup, retopology for the head and added some details. Little render too.

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