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Old 09-11-2013, 08:33 AM   #1
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Pinup wip

Hello guys,
i usually do real time video games characters that's why i'm still a little new to this, but i always wish to learn new things
so feel free to give me feedbacks and critics !
it's going to be a retro pinup






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Old 09-11-2013, 02:11 PM   #2
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I Love This!

Love the style of your pinup character, body shape reminds me of a slightly exaggerated Christina Hendricks. Definitely be following this thread, look forward to seeing more.
 
Old 09-12-2013, 07:51 AM   #3
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Nice Job! I really like it so far, especially the facial features . My only comment would be to give the chest more of a natural look (a bit of the upward pointy/perkiness sort of deal). Right now it feels a little like a "boob job". Personal sort of taste I figure. Either way, look forward to seeing the updates! cheers!
 
Old 09-13-2013, 09:00 AM   #4
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Her face is super cute, but I think her waist is too high. The hips curve in and attach to the body quite high up. She should have a more lengthened midriff/abdominal area, although it depends on the style you're going for.
 
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hey guys
thanks for the feedbacks !
i improved a couple things, i hope you'll like it !
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Old 09-23-2013, 06:51 AM   #6
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hey back guys
little update with pose and i'm just trying a couple things with renders
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I LOVE her!

She is so delicately curvy, yet you see that it comes from her being a REAL woman in shape! This is absolutely wonderful.

Regarding her clothes, let me give you an idea, a little inspiration: Do you watch Mad Men?
Do you know Joan? (The lady who used to manage the secretaries at Starling Cooper?)

She is a very curvy woman, and therefore they did not dress her at the "to us common" pettycoats since that would have made her hip area go way tooo wiiiiide. They went for something "slimmer" instead wich plaid wonderfully with her female curves without having to expose too much breasts or leg to look sexy. That fascinated me a lot actually.

Let me see if I can find some reference pictures on Google to show what I mean...

OK so I found:

http://www.vanityfair.com/online/os....size.Joan3.jpg
http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/_.../a/ab/00290.jpg
http://0.tqn.com/d/diyfashion/1/0/0...-joan-dress.jpg
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_0yxVdBRGW.../s640/joan2.jpg

And as bonus: ^^
http://images5.fanpop.com/image/pho...86-1024-768.jpg
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Old 09-23-2013, 04:24 PM   #8
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Christina Hendricks Mad Men...

Love this, love the seductive pose also. As said previous reminiscent of Joan Holloway/Harris form Mad Men (cool show!)...
 
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hey
thanks for the links and the comments !
i might not change the clothes now, but that's good ideas and inspiring, maybe for a next one ^^
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Cool, I will be happy to see those! <3
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Old 11-20-2013, 11:51 PM   #11
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hey guys
it has been a while since last update but i've been pretty busy this last month.
so there's pinup's next wip
hope you'll like it


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Fantastic!...

Great character design here, pose, texturing. 5*s!
 
Old 11-23-2013, 05:28 PM   #13
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thanks for your comment Artidigtal ! i have increased the hands a little bit more
i'm not sure about the eyes yet heh


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Really cool stuff. For the eyes I would imagine them to be a little bit more alert/wide in the first comp. Maybe aim the eyes down more so you don't have to go crazy with raising the eyelids.

The poses are great, they have a lot of character. Nice work.
 
Old 12-04-2013, 12:04 AM   #15
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hello guys
There's next update, i'm almost done with this i guess. Feel free to give me any suggestion/advice before i completely finish it !


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