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Old 06 June 2013   #1
Soda Bottle

How I can take his ti the next level?
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Old 06 June 2013   #2
The liquid looks great, the dew too. The bottle feels like an odd shape to me, but perhaps that's what you intended. The most distracting part to me is the lighting, that big solid shadow that's cast to the right. With this I would go for something softer, if you can cast shadows from hdri's in mental ray, that would be the route I would go down, with maybe a more subtle area light that's not so hard.
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Old 06 June 2013   #3
Hey man,

Did your image get stretched, or this this some type of new bottle design? Your bottle looks disproportionate from the classic Coke design.

-AJ
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Old 06 June 2013   #4
The water on the bottle looks more like a normal map than droplets. Try to find some reference for it and see how it acts. Also, the water on the cap isn't letting any of the red color through.

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Old 06 June 2013   #5
Thnx for the crit guys, will be making adjustments. My intentions weren't to make an odd bottle design, didn't realize how distracting the model would be.
 
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