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Old 06 June 2013   #1
Chained Wip Need critique

So this is my model, mostly designed and rendered in BPR

http://s1290.photobucket.com/user/G...html?sort=3&o=0
 
Old 06 June 2013   #2
Do you have any other angles? And some closeups of different parts of the image? Chains and texture might need a little work

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Old 06 June 2013   #3
Your existing thread on this exact same subject is on the second page of this forum.
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthr...?f=43&t=1111834
There was no need to make a new thread.
 
Old 06 June 2013   #4
It looks like your trying to make a statement, build a context that isn't strong enough yet. I see am arm is free from a shackle but this scene feels very generic and too much against the wall. I did a quick search using "breaking free from shackles" and below are some examples from the results. Hope this makes some sense...



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I'm not saying your scene needs to be like any of these but yours I think needs to be more dynamic.

Last edited by Artdigital : 06 June 2013 at 11:31 PM.
 
Old 06 June 2013   #5
Hey man,

It might also help to add some darker and more moody lighting. I would imagine that your character would be in a dungeon, and that it would be pretty dark.

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