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Old 06-04-2013, 02:16 AM   #1
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A WIP called Brad

Looking for some feedback. I've been doing a ton of practice sculpts these days, and I thought I should probably take one to completion...what better time than now?

Just started a few days ago. My reference is Brad Pitt. I'm not looking for a replica, just a sculpt that gets his essence. It turned out a bit more detailed than I expected. Anyways..."Don't be coy. Just make with the cookies!"


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Old 06-04-2013, 01:32 PM   #2
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That quote above concerning cookies...that's from The Office btw. I am not literally asking for cookies, this is far from perfect.

Made some minor tweaks, but totally redid the eyes. They were bugging the hell out of me. Still are, to be honest, but that might be something I remedy after I retopo.


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Old 06-04-2013, 04:36 PM   #3
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You have several anatomic problems. Stop Highres detail and you must focus on your anatomy proportions.

What's your references pictures?
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Old 06-04-2013, 06:33 PM   #4
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You have several anatomic problems. Stop Highres detail and you must focus on your anatomy proportions.

What's your references pictures?

Thank you for the feedback. I doubt I will be doing much more detail at this stage. I am not going for photo realism. I can post my references tonight. Could you be more specific about my proportions?
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Here are my reference images . Also, a few more screens. I did some minor placement updates, and polished down some features. I like this rev...I think I'll sleep on it, and retopo tomorrow or the next day.

Again, would love some feedback...especially on the eyes. I like them better now, but there's still something about them that seems a bit off. Just can't place it.

One thing I don't think I've mentioned. I have been modeling for some time, but character work has neeever been my strong suit. Also, I just started sculpting about 3 months ago, so almost all of my character sculpts have been practice. If I follow all the way through, this will be my first character sculpt/still project. I'm crossing my fingers on this one, folks, so any help you can give would be much appreciated.


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