LOW POLY Aaliyah...Superhero in progress

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Old 06 June 2013   #31
Hi MissOptimist, thanks for message. I had seen your latest changes and really like them but feel some areas could do with some tweaking and more so, polygons added (I realise you want it low poly) but feel this may help. Hope these amendments make some sense.






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Old 06 June 2013   #32
Thanks for the feedbacks, I will come back for an update.
As far as breast area though, all polygons there are 4 sided. I know it's kinda hard to see cuz the wireframe is far.
 
Old 06 June 2013   #33
Another update:




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Old 06 June 2013   #34
Hi!

I have some feedback to add as well:





Good luck!
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Old 06 June 2013   #35
Thanks, I will get back to it to make changes
 
Old 06 June 2013   #36
Originally Posted by CGIPadawan: Hi!

I have some feedback to add as well:





Good luck!


I made the changes:

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Old 06 June 2013   #37
CGIPadawan made some excellent suggestions, an improvement for sure.
 
Old 06 June 2013   #38
Okay, maybe +1 or +2 more with the same suggestions I posted before (basically do a bit more of those).

And in addition, you need to pull out the Upper Lip region as a whole a bit more (a bit like a daffy duck bill).

Do it just enough after you've adjusted the Lower Lip a bit more as per previous suggestion. This should re-establish the "overbite look" on the mouth and simulate that "default pouting" look that Aaliyah normally sports.

Work it in degrees... and just avoid exaggerating it.
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Old 06 June 2013   #39
Originally Posted by MissOptimist: I made the changes:

Okay so I made her have the daffy duck type of lips
CHECK THIS ONE OUT :

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Old 06 June 2013   #40
Upper lip a bit thinner... lower lip a bit rounder and puffier.
Remember...Change only in degrees... nothing too big.

Also.. Kindly post latest front and side views with corresponding Reference images.

It's all the little things now we'll be looking for.
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Old 06 June 2013   #41
Ok so I slightly made the upper lip thinner and the lower lips a bit puffier. Here's the update:






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Old 06 June 2013   #42
Okay... more feedback from me:


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Old 06 June 2013   #43
CGIPadawan beat me to it, both similar ideas, thought I'd add my possible amendments too







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Old 06 June 2013   #44
Thanks once again for your time.

I selected some vertices around the mouth area and pulled them forward so that the skull is not flat. I moved the eyes farther apart from each other and pulled the corners to the back of the head a bit. I also straightened the upper lips. For the cheeks, I curved the topology for more organic look. Here's another update:



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Old 06 June 2013   #45
Nice amendment but if you look at the side profile photos you will see that the area below the nose (areas include mouth to chin) are should be pushed back.



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