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Old 05-16-2013, 09:39 PM   #1
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Andrew Caron
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Hello! This is my first post to this site. I recently created this scene as a school project. Now that the class is over, I would like to push it further. Any advice would be appreciated.

This was created using Maya.

Old 05-17-2013, 10:48 AM   #2
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Mo Ali
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It's a lovely image. I think that certain areas are lacking in specularity though, like the turtle shell, jar lid and to a lesser extent the book. Adding some light and/or modifying the shaders would pick up on some detail and add contrast. At the moment the scene looks a bit "flat" like it was a picture taken on a cloudy day.
Old 05-17-2013, 05:20 PM   #3
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Thank you very much for your reply. Now that you mention it, there does seem to be a bit of a mismatch between the bottle and the rest of the scene. I will definitely explore this avenue in my next edits.
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