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Old 03-27-2013, 04:57 PM   #1
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this is my first post here. Right now i am trying to set some good lightning. Later i'll put some furniture and decorations, I really hope that end result will be nice. Everything was made with 3ds Max and rendered with vray. My goal is to be realistic.




 
Old 03-28-2013, 04:40 AM   #2
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Hey man,

Welcome to the forums!

Your render overall looks pretty good, but you've got a few quality issues.

-The walls looks blotchy. Try turning up the number of photons or the smoothing on your FG.

-That black bar (I think its a curtain track) is causing problems with your indirect illumination. Did you try to apply a reflective shader to that?

-The tops of your walls above your window looks a little dark. Try turning up the ray depth of your simulation so plenty of light reaches those areas.

-Your floor texture also looks a little tiled. It might help to add a few edges in your floor, and use a custom UV map to slightly offset things.

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Thanks man for your advices.

The curtian track i must check but i am pretty sure that i put some reflective material like matte plastic. This is only test render so that's why i have so mutch noise.

I didnt undesrtood what u ment by "turning up depth of ray"
 
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