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Old 02-24-2013, 06:30 PM   #1
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Still on(My first animated Project)

Hello Everyone,

I would like to show you my personal project i am working on nowadays.


I am creating an Environment of a big farm field with a house in the middle this is some what an exterior idea.

i have started the modeling of house and some other assets
There are total 5 main assets in Exterior.
House
ScareCrow
Windmill
Truck
and the wheat field ground.


Taking that in mind that i have 8 gb of ram and onboard intel graphic .I will try not to fill my shots with million of polys O.O and go out of memory at the time of rendering in mental ray O.O

Here are some Renders of Modeling Done in Autodesk Maya.

More to come soon

Feedback and suggestions are welcome.

Thanks
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Here is the Reference image.



Exterior Asset 1-House I have added some extra elements to house


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Old 02-24-2013, 06:40 PM   #2
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I looks very nice. I like how you're able to make it look old even before getting to textures.

It would be nice to upload bigger images. all I'm seeing right now are almost thumbnails.

Nice work!
 
Old 02-24-2013, 06:44 PM   #3
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Thank you oliverth.

Here the one with bigger Resolution.
http://www1.picturepush.com/photo/a...ips-Maximum.jpg
 
Old 02-25-2013, 02:14 AM   #4
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I really like it so far. The house (reference image) looks like the house from that movie the 'burbs. (or was it "the suburbs"?) That movie where its set in the suburbs and like there are all these normal houses like a suburb would have, and then a creepy run down victorian era house that looks all spooky and has like inbred hillbillys living in it. You should check that movie out, the house in that movie could give you some great insight into how the house will look in motion.

Like I said the modeling looks great so far. I am working on a similar project and am finding the texturing, lighting and appropriate render settings (I'm using VRay) to be a little more challenging. Keep posting, I look forward to seeing more!
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Old 02-25-2013, 02:33 AM   #5
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Yah I like it to. You got a good sense of detail.. even the house porch have an angle
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Old 02-25-2013, 12:00 PM   #6
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Hey man,

Great work! I really like the model. Cant wait to see it textured!

-AJ
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Old 02-25-2013, 06:20 PM   #7
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Schreibzilla-- Hi Schreibzilla I will try to post everyday. I have searched for the movie its The burb(1989) hope i will find some more good ideas in it.
Thank you..

Scote:- thank you scote...

Aj- Hi Aj
Yes i will start the texturing from Next week till then i will complete modeling of my Exterior and Interior Assets.

anyways where is your 'Man-of-War' looking forward for some wips..


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Here are some wips
Two New Assets
Windmill and Truck.



for bigger resolution - http://www3.picturepush.com/photo/a...millMaximum.jpg

more to come soon

Feedback and suggestions are welcome.
 
Old 02-25-2013, 06:45 PM   #8
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Cool man!

Could you maybe fill us in with some more info about your project? What kind of look are you going for? Realistic? Stylized?

You've don't a great job of capturing the essence of the house, but your truck looks a little lackluster compared to your reference. Your wheel arches look a little flat, the grill look over simplified and square, and the hood looks too round. I think your cabin should be taller, and the wheels smaller. It looks too low to the ground and modern, not tall and awkward like in your reference. A lot of the corners of your body panels are too rounded off, and overall, your truck seems to have lost some of the personality of the reference.

I think you've also got some normal issues on your truck, but I'm sure you know how to fix those.

-AJ

I'm still working on the boat... Ill post an update soon. Thanks for asking.
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Cool man!

Could you maybe fill us in with some more info about your project? What kind of look are you going for? Realistic? Stylized?

You've don't a great job of capturing the essence of the house, but your truck looks a little lackluster compared to your reference. Your wheel arches look a little flat, the grill look over simplified and square, and the hood looks too round. I think your cabin should be taller, and the wheels smaller. It looks too low to the ground and modern, not tall and awkward like in your reference. A lot of the corners of your body panels are too rounded off, and overall, your truck seems to have lost some of the personality of the reference.

I think you've also got some normal issues on your truck, but I'm sure you know how to fix those.

-AJ

I'm still working on the boat... Ill post an update soon. Thanks for asking.






Thanks for the advice i will make the correction and post it again soon.

Here is some more info about project.

I am going for a scary evening shot of 5:30-6 Pm and and will do in semi-realistic style.There is no character in the short i have planed to make a 1 n half min of shot with Pov cam animation(hand held cam)
which comes out from a tall grassy field towards the house(exterior elements ) and then interior shot.
overall i want to create a scary mood in the middle of a big wheat field with
most view-hut, scare-crow
secondary elements-windmill farm truck a and some other stuffs outside the house.

Thanks
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Old 02-27-2013, 05:13 PM   #10
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Hello everyone,

Here is a Wip of scarecrow.
I want the scarecrow to covered up with sack and grass later on i will use a displacement map on face.
Scare Crow.

For Bigger Resolution:- http://dirtvic.picturepush.com/show...&image=12296026


Now I am going back to the truck for making some changes.

Feedback and suggestions are welcome.
 
Old 03-05-2013, 08:56 AM   #11
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Interior Assets

Hello Everyone

I have started working on Interior Assets.
Here are some updates.
Sewing machine and
rocking chair(wanted to make a weird chair as the man who lives in the house is a tough weird guy)
For high resolution:-http://www3.picturepush.com/photo/a/12341571/img/Picture-Box/cahirchanges.jpg



Fireplace Wip-
For high resolution:-http://www4.picturepush.com/photo/a/12341602/1024/Picture-Box/fireplace.jpg





Feedback Ideas and suggestions are welcome.


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Old 03-05-2013, 11:02 AM   #12
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You're always sticking to your references pretty well, and it is working. I am liking all the details, with what you have right now, there would already be a nice amount of them.

Keep working !
 
Old 03-05-2013, 08:46 PM   #13
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Piano

@Seehr Thanks man
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Here is another interior asset



Piano want to create and old broken piano in abandoned.
For high resolution
http://dirtvic.picturepush.com/show...&image=12341437




Feedback ideas and suggestions are welcome.

-dushyant
 
Old 03-07-2013, 08:45 PM   #14
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Crow

hello Everyone

SO i have started working Organic Model. Never had any experience with organic modeling.


Here is a Wip- Crow

For higher resolution:-
http://dirtvic.picturepush.com/show...&image=12361585





Feedback ideas suggestion are welcome.


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Old 03-08-2013, 02:30 PM   #15
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crow Wip

some more progress

body is almost complete wings parts are left.

for higher resolution:-
http://dirtvic.picturepush.com/show...&image=12365288
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Right click>View Image



Critique needed.
Feedback ideas suggestions are welcome.

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