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Old 02-18-2013, 07:32 PM   #1
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Imperial Sentinel

hi everyone

i'm working on this model for two week now to use it in future projects

all opinion are welcome


 
Old 02-19-2013, 09:25 PM   #2
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New update

Resize the gun and work a little on the interior

 
Old 02-20-2013, 10:39 PM   #3
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I'm surprised this hasn't got any comments yet. Mechs are pretty common around here, but this is a nicely detailed one. I think it's a bit weak around the cockpit cage and needs some safety screens or bars, and maybe some pads. Also, the diesel stacks are a little too much like those on a truck and could be made a little more techy or something.
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thanks man for the comment

i think the cockpit need more detail , i'll try to work on it and see what come up
 
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Old 02-21-2013, 09:33 PM   #7
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Whoa! Very nice, I'm keeping an eye on this one, keep up the nice work! I like the way the detail is evenly distributed. Are you already thinking of the scene you are going to put it in?
 
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Whoa! Very nice, I'm keeping an eye on this one, keep up the nice work! I like the way the detail is evenly distributed. Are you already thinking of the scene you are going to put it in?


i plan to use it in future project as swat robot

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Old 02-22-2013, 09:53 PM   #9
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this looks sweet.

i really like how the mech actually looks like it would be fully functional and move with ease
great work
 
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this looks sweet.

i really like how the mech actually looks like it would be fully functional and move with ease
great work


thanks for the nice words
 
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i think the background need more work
 
Old 02-26-2013, 09:34 PM   #13
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You should post a higher quality render, I can't see the textures really well
 
Old 02-26-2013, 10:23 PM   #14
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You should post a higher quality render, I can't see the textures really well


this is best quality i can make with my poor hardware
 
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