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Old 02-11-2013, 04:46 PM   #1
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clown in old room

hi all. this is my wip

 
Old 02-11-2013, 07:48 PM   #2
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Hey Great work so far, I love the complexity of the scene.
Things that stand out to me are the air vent in the back seems too perfect, maybe adding a bit of buckling in the metal.
also the hands of the figure are too unnatural. if there is supposed to be an un-nerving mood to this as it seems it should, maybe the hand on his thigh should show some kind of anxiety/nervosa. or the hand gripping the baloon would be slightly tighter.
if he is supposed to be relaxed then the hand on the thigh could rest more so and have fingers subtly wrap the side of the leg.

I am curious how this turns out in the end. good work thus far. and good luck as you build it up!
 
Old 02-11-2013, 07:57 PM   #3
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I like the idea and the overall composition, but it seems the clown has some proportion issues - is his head perhaps a little too small? it also seems strange that the head is relatively detailed while the arms and hands could do with a lot more work, as they're not very realistic. Unless they're still a work in progress?
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Hey man,

I kind of like it! Its a bit different.

Could you maybe write us a few paragraphs more about what your going for? Is it meant to be slightly creepy? Will the clown have any hair?

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figure work in progress.
yes, will be creepy.
hair will be

bad I speak on English
 
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