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Old 01-22-2013, 06:06 AM   #1
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3D Still - Ancient Town - Need Critiques

I used Maya, Photoshop and Vray. It's my first try of photorealistic style. Please give me some critiques. Thanks!
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:43 AM   #2
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awesome rendering, i only found the sky to be not so dynamic. also the street is empty and too clean. try a bit leaves on the floor and dust. other than that love the detailing on the buildings.
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Old 01-22-2013, 10:26 AM   #3
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overall this is really nice, i would say you need to focus on a few details more, there are a few too many bump maps on exposed brickwork ect.
floor textures look a bit mushy?
maybe add some detailing or rust to the bike on the left it stands out as a bit too CG to me?
looking good though!
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Old 01-23-2013, 03:38 AM   #4
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Yeah, I know. When you look at the close view of the bike, it looks better. But the dust on bike doesn't stand out in the big view, which made me unhappy, since I did put lots of effort on the bike.

I know the pedals of bikes were not nice in the close view.



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overall this is really nice, i would say you need to focus on a few details more, there are a few too many bump maps on exposed brickwork ect.
floor textures look a bit mushy?
maybe add some detailing or rust to the bike on the left it stands out as a bit too CG to me?
looking good though!
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Old 01-23-2013, 08:45 AM   #5
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Yes I can see you have textured the bike. I think what the issue is, is that you have simply covered the bike in mud and rust. Look at pictures or a real bike that has been ridden. Notice where more sections of mid are, or localised rust. It would not simply be covered by one generic layer of rust or dirt. Do you see what I mean?
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