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Old 01-20-2013, 06:19 PM   #1
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Old 01-21-2013, 04:52 AM   #2
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thats an awesome rendering, but the side walls texture seem to be repetitive. also the view is very simple IMHO, try something different angle. other than that its great.
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Old 01-21-2013, 10:29 AM   #3
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i would completely remove those two dominant walls on the sides, imho they are hurting the image, removing them could reveal some nice Mediterranean landscape in the background, which would be much more fitting to the pretty villa than two large claustrophobic walls
 
Old 01-21-2013, 11:09 AM   #4
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looks amazing really good work , the olny thing id change is less repetitive textures, try have a different texture and bump spec ect for each wall
 
Old 01-21-2013, 08:00 PM   #5
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Looks really nice but I do agree with the two previous posters, the two walls on the sides aren't really working at the moment. You could either remove them, move the camera in closer or add interesting details to make them less unsightly.

Your close-ups reveal low resolution textures and models, specifically on the pond and the chairs and table next to it. If it were me, I'd focus on making the master shot look awesome and not worry about the close-ups.
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Old 01-22-2013, 10:16 AM   #6
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thanks guys for opinion
I think material the wall it's very bad you're all right
I changed material the wall gave me your opinion or advise me what the texture is better


 
Old 01-26-2013, 10:12 AM   #7
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hey there. i think the wall is better, also you could show that the walls are not just walls, walls of neighboring houses or buildings. also the stairs on the right before looked good, dont delete the stairs.
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