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Old 01-05-2013, 07:36 PM   #1
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the cop

This will be a cop when im done.. any ideas or suggestions for improvement so far?
 
Old 01-05-2013, 07:40 PM   #2
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wireframe.
 
Old 01-05-2013, 07:44 PM   #3
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Hi,

The space between the eyes seems to be too big.

Do you want to create only his head ? or you are going to make a bust/full body ?
 
Old 01-05-2013, 08:37 PM   #4
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im sorry to say this but your wireframe is quite wrong.
imho it would be best to completely redo it while youre in early stage

here is a example of a proper looking wirefreame for human face
 
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Yea, your wire frame is not ideal. You really do need to start over, and focus more on your edge flow.

Using the above image as reference would be a great place to start.
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Not to start a edge flow war but, even the above image isnt 100% correct. the whole idea of edge loops is create a definable shape to come back to while animating. namely a circle... the shape around this guys mouth while nicely done should go all the way around and the smile line from the nose should go around the mouth like this:
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Old 01-06-2013, 01:45 PM   #7
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Thank you for you replies. It is a great help.. I made a new. What do you think of this one.
 
Old 01-06-2013, 06:19 PM   #8
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Edge flow is looking way better, however you should present the wireframe not in a front view pose only. Give us a 3/4 view for example, so we can see the depth of your model. Keep it up..
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He will have a helmet on, so you will not see the ears.
 
Old 01-07-2013, 04:51 PM   #10
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One of the problems I notice right away concerns the edge flow from the nostrils. The way the underlying muscles and fat in your cheeks work, it creates a crease from the edge of your nostril around your mouth, and then curving around to your chin. Making this loop is very important for most facial expressions to look right. I drew over your screen shot with red lines where I would remove edges, and blue lines for how I would start trying to re-work the edge loops. Hope this is somewhat helpful...
 
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