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Old 12-18-2012, 06:09 PM   #1
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Iron Giant

hi this is my first model I'm working after a while.Opinions are well reveived.Sorry for my bad english

 
Old 12-18-2012, 08:06 PM   #2
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Hey, I really like your model. Proportions are looking right and you modeled pretty much every detail. What looks weird to me is the chest but maybe it's just the perspective you chose. Do you have a render from another angle?
 
Old 12-18-2012, 08:40 PM   #3
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Old 12-18-2012, 09:30 PM   #4
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Old 12-19-2012, 01:29 PM   #5
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another render with more details

 
Old 12-19-2012, 02:05 PM   #6
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try to add more details and unless there isnt any texture applied can't say how it would look. but looks nice on an initial level.
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Old 12-19-2012, 02:39 PM   #7
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Old 12-19-2012, 02:42 PM   #8
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this weekend I'll start texturing the model. thanks for your criticism
 
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can not wait.
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Old 01-15-2013, 05:37 PM   #12
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more progress.Opinions are well received.sorry for my bad english.

 
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