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  10 October 2012
Breakfast

Here is a work of me, what do you think? What is next? or is it done?

All comments are welcome.

 
  10 October 2012
Wow! This looks really good!

Maybe just a few nitpicky things:

-The fork looks too round
-There doesn't appear to be any surface tension on the soup
-That highlight on the inside of the soup bowl looks to bright.
-You've maybe got too much saturation in your HDRI raytrace reflections. The blue from the window is too strong.
-The stems on the flowers could be thicker, and the leafs more transparent.
-The orange juice looks to thick and red, and could use some foamy bubbles around the outside.

But overall great work, just pointing out some small things.

-AJ
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  11 November 2012
Originally Posted by AJ1: Wow! This looks really good!

Maybe just a few nitpicky things:

-The fork looks too round
-There doesn't appear to be any surface tension on the soup
-That highlight on the inside of the soup bowl looks to bright.
-You've maybe got too much saturation in your HDRI raytrace reflections. The blue from the window is too strong.
-The stems on the flowers could be thicker, and the leafs more transparent.
-The orange juice looks to thick and red, and could use some foamy bubbles around the outside.

But overall great work, just pointing out some small things.

-AJ


Thanks for all

Any other advices?
 
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