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Old 10-07-2012, 03:34 PM   #1
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Character professor (continuation)

Tomorrow I will start refining head and arms. He is a good character, a bit strange and loves his job more than people. And definitely, must be a fast-food lover.


 
Old 10-07-2012, 10:14 PM   #2
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I like him. Reminds me of a fat Clark Kent.
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Old 10-10-2012, 04:03 PM   #3
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Thanks man! An update.

 
Old 10-11-2012, 09:33 AM   #4
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Looks sweet! Guess you had a lot of fun with finding references...

I like very much his sides, and also his thighs - greatly modeled! Not sure about that line going down from the belly button (looks for me almost female somehow, but i won’t start to search for photos now...). And maybe the nipples could point more down, regarding the hanging rest, looking here freshly forward. His knees aren’t fully there yet - they seem to be narrow on your update (while the corrections there are going into a good direction).

Otherwise truly fantastic work. Hats off!
 
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I like him. Reminds me of a fat Clark Kent.


He reminds me of Dennis from Jurassic Park, who was played by Wayne Knight.

Great work on the model! I would say maybe the neck fat folds could be a bit deeper, but I understand that Zbrush would have trouble with the polys colliding.

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Thanks you guys! I greatly appreciate your valuable feedback.
 
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A small update.

 
Old 11-16-2012, 04:10 PM   #8
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Good work. He is growing another extra chin as the work progresses.
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Oh! So this guy is getting your extreme study on the ‘full-figured’ type. Since he’s supposed to be a relatively young and still active guy i’d try the following:
- reduce volume at the upper body: somewhat thinner arms (especially radialis muscles seem to be very strong); not sure about this one, but i tryed a version with the shoulders less wide; and also the belly slightly smaller while keeping the shape.
- armpits could point inward (front and back)
- and the face could be much smoother, regarding his age and his physique.
- plus: i’d give him those glasses also with the nude version (belonging to his typical look)
 
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Thank you once again! I really agree with your comments, you are right. I will post updates tomorrow.
 
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An update.

 
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It’s coming nicely, mister3d! Huge progress since the first version. Some thoughts:




Also the face is much better! Could go even more toward ‘baby face’.(cheeks for example)
 
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Thank you Zokana! I made those adjustments. This is a photoshop overpaint for the time being. I will make the glasses more massive when modeling.

 
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