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Old 10-01-2012, 10:36 AM   #1
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WIP Water Heater

Hi all.
This is my first post here, trying to find my way around.


I have done graphics for games for many years, but now I want to explore VIZ modeling and rendering a little more.

I found this water heater in my kitchen and used it as inspiration, for this rendered image.

I still want to do some work on the image:
*More, environment: tabletop, background kitchen area.
*Refine metal material.
*Lighting and environment reflection.

Any comments?
Stephen
 
Old 10-10-2012, 02:16 PM   #2
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Updated

I rearranged the camera and lights a little.
Also added some kitchen tabletops and walls.



I still want to tweak size of the wood textures and add some more detail to the back wall.
 
Old 10-10-2012, 03:03 PM   #3
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Looks great so far. Is the metal material supposed to be something like brushed stainless steel? If so the reflection might need to be toned down a little and also more blurred. Also, the bump on the wall to the left of the image looks a little strong.
 
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Thanks for the feedback csalexan.
It is noted.
I have added a little extra detail and change the composition a little.

I still want to add a little more detail to the back table, and then maybe do the final polish of materials and lighting.

Here is the latest render.

 
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Here is the latest update.
Still a bit to go.
 
Old 12-10-2012, 12:57 PM   #6
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Here is latest version of the scene.
I color corrected in Photoshop after render...
Next i might add some steam from cups and water heater.
Enjoy.

 
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