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Old 09-25-2012, 07:00 PM   #1
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Hi everyone! I tried to post this image in showcase gallery but I got an email that says it doesn't meet the requirements.

I just want to know how can I improve this image. Thank you!

 
Old 09-27-2012, 10:24 PM   #2
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You could try giving the scene more of a context, maybe even a pose, at the moment the creature is just on the page.
 
Old 09-27-2012, 10:31 PM   #3
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You could try giving the scene more of a context, maybe even a pose, at the moment the creature is just on the page.


Thanks for the reply Artdigital. What do you mean scene with more context? like putting him in environment or better background?
 
Old 09-27-2012, 11:57 PM   #4
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He has been reject because He look to T pose for them. A plain background is not very attractive also
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Old 09-28-2012, 04:28 PM   #5
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He has been reject because He look to T pose for them. A plain background is not very attractive also

Thanks for the reply Scote, it makes sense now to me.
 
Old 09-29-2012, 10:28 AM   #6
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I'm with Scote on the background, it looks very basic at the moment and the model is just integrated into the scene without any real care which is a pity because your model is great and the detailing is fantastic! (and the white lighting too), if you could create a scene with as much care and consideration I wouldn't see a reason why it would be rejected.

When I see this creature it does make me think Blade II, maybe find something from whatever inspired you to do this to create your scene.
 
Old 09-29-2012, 02:07 PM   #7
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I'm somewhat surprised of the flow of the muscle fibers in the pectoral muscles http://www.myhousecallmd.com/wp-con...al-Anatomy1.jpg
or http://www.ironworkout.com/chestbig.jpg
 
Old 09-30-2012, 11:12 PM   #8
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Hi everyone, thanks for all the feedback! I got the answers that I need. I gotta keep those in mind for future project.
 
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