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Old 09 September 2012   #1
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Hi All,
This is my current project and need your valuable feedback either as a comment or as a criticism to improve the same.



 
Old 09 September 2012   #2
Has a very 'current disney' style to it.
 
Old 09 September 2012   #3
I think the inner corner of the eye will be a problem. Maybe casting a shadow to make that corner too dark
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Old 09 September 2012   #4
Scote is right, that part of the eye will look wrong once you get the textures and lighting in. You might want to close it up or add the part of the eye that goes in there (I think it's call a lacrimal or tear duct?). It should be an easy fix.
Other than that, I think you have the makings of a nice model.
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Old 09 September 2012   #5
Thanks for your feed backs... Will work on the comments to improve my model..
 
Old 09 September 2012   #6
Looks really good. I like it. As mention, very Disney like, which is not a bad thing.
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Old 10 October 2012   #7
By referring to your critics & feedback, I worked on the eye area and now I have completed the model...

Please do share your feedback on this...


 
Old 10 October 2012   #8
The fingers seems too thin, & feet too small. I think you need to put a little bit of wrinkles on the top. Otherwise, looking good.
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Old 10 October 2012   #9
Originally Posted by PKD: The fingers seems too thin, & feet too small. I think you need to put a little bit of wrinkles on the top. Otherwise, looking good.


Like he said. Rapunzle (your ref I think) have small fingers but not that thin





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Old 01 January 2013   #10
Hi,

Please review my work and provide me with your suggestions / feedbacks to improve it further.

 
Old 02 February 2013   #11
Second step towards MY Girl...

 
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