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Veteran
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Alessandro Manzani
3D Modeler/Character Artist
Accademia Nemo
Florence,
Italy
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Mini Cooper, critique on compositing.
Hi guys,
I would like your opinion and critique on my compositing (shader, lighting, shadow, ...) thanks. ![]() |
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Lord of the posts
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Kiadaw Phua
Hobbyist not Hobbit
Germany
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The perspective distortion is too much. Thats the first thing to be fixed. Also I think the mini lack a bit of details, & the profiles are not smooth.
Do you have some views of the car only. |
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just a creator
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Samuel Cote
3D Artist
MPC
Montreal,
Canada
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Clearly the glass are wrong.. Use a Incidence
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William Chestnutt
Director
Lymington,
United Kingdom
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Hello,
As Scote said sort the transparency and reflection of the glass. The shadows in front of the car are completely wrong compared to the sun light. Also potentially the colour of the shadows need to have more blue tones if I am comparing them to the original image?... Hard to tell from here. On the red bumper/hood closest to us there seems to be a strange specular which seems unnatural compared to the sun direction again. Seems too saturated in that area. Also I am wondering... If you notice how much darker the shadow side of the railings are in the image compared tot he sunny sides, should the wheels be darker than they are considering they are out of the sun and it is getting dusky?.. not sure but worth playing with maybe. Getting there though good work ![]() Will |
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Veteran
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Alessandro Manzani
3D Modeler/Character Artist
Accademia Nemo
Florence,
Italy
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Hi guys,
thanks for help me. I adjusted some things. What do you think? ![]() |
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Frequenter
Jonathan Colvin
Graphic Designer
Sarasota,
USA
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looking very good! I like the adjustments you made to the glass
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Oleksandr Aleksandrov
Kiev,
Ukraine
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The sun should be brighter.
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Veteran
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Alessandro Manzani
3D Modeler/Character Artist
Accademia Nemo
Florence,
Italy
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Thank for advices.
I don't think to put a driver behind the wheel. I would like to create a static image with the car stopped. |
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