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Old 09 September 2012   #1
Human head critique

Hello guys,

This is the character I did for the latest Vray challenge. I would like to hear your opinions and general critique so I can improve on my next run.




Thanks!
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Old 09 September 2012   #2
Good! He really does look surprised! As for crits: His molars seem to be somewhat small, and the same for the ear. Had at first glance the impression that something was off with his eyes. At second glance iíd say that they are sitting rather deep in that skull. Otherwise nice, nice also the textures.(perhaps his nostrils are a bit dark - smoker? hope you donít mind the bad joke... but they are nonetheless unusually dark)

Cool work! Keep it up!
 
Old 09 September 2012   #3
Thanks for the crit, Zokana, it means a lot and I agree with everything.
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Old 09 September 2012   #4
Any other pointers? Be brutal please.
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Old 09 September 2012   #5
Add stronger eyebrow folds

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Old 09 September 2012   #6
Looks great!

The pupils feel funny, & too deep in the eyes. Normally, it looks centre to the iris & more forward regardless of angle of view due to convex effect of round eyes (I think).

The skin is little on the shiny side & looks a little rubbery. Otherwise, looks good.
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Old 09 September 2012   #7
Add a tongue, and close the eyes a tad - at the moment they look too wide.
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Old 10 October 2012   #8
Another interesting shot

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