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Old 08 August 2012   #1
The Black Sofa

Hi Guys,

this is a work i did for my online portfolio,trying to get a realistic and artistic look to it.

please feel free to give me your opinions and critics to get it to look better.
Softwares Used: 3DS MAX - Vray - Photoshop.



http://www.flickr.com/photos/310456.../in/photostream

Regards,
Rakan
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Old 09 September 2012   #2
Black is seldom BLACK

Hi I am new here and this is my first reply.

I like your image, it has allot of good detail both in modelling, materials, lighting and rendering.

There are a couple of things i am going to comment on.

The focus of the image is the sofa, but it is mostly all black. This makes it hard to see the great details in the sofa. If this was an advertisement for a sofa I think it would be lighted different, so the details would show better. The same goes for the bottom part of the red pillow on the sofa. Allot of the good images here http://goo.gl/sQdoV is shot like that.

The other thing that stick out to me is the color of the upper part of the painting on the wall. In my opinion it blends way too much with the wall color.

I hope this is helpful.

Stephen
 
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