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Old 11-11-2012, 01:43 PM   #16
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His torso seems to be somewhat too straight in side view - itís perhaps more the pose than the shapes - except the stomach area, which is going in too much, also here.
http://www.newfaces.com/blogs/wp-co...male-models.jpg
And ribs are standing out too much at the sides (the guy is skinny but not starving). Plus clavicles could look slightly more relaxed toward the shoulders.

The rear of his thighs (incl the buttocks) seems to be rather flat in 1/4 view. And the definition of the muscles right above the knee suits more a body builder with tense muscles but not a normal or a skinny guy.

The character is generally very well done - itís only the myotonus needing now some special care.

btw: i was thinking exactly about the same guy youíre showing in that link when seeing your character - my favourite villain in Out of Sight. Please, give him those bedroom eyes! )

Cool work!
 
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Thanks PKD and Zokana! I will work now on his body, so your comments are very valuable.
Here's an update.
 
Old 11-11-2012, 02:15 PM   #18
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Nice improvements! The bridge of the nose appears to be rather narrow at first glance - i'd try to get it smoother, and much smoother between the eyes. The skull could get just a little bit wider imo.(not the jaw)
 
Old 11-11-2012, 07:16 PM   #19
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I think the ears are too high, & the chin too long.

Otherwise, very good job. Big improvement from last image posted.
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Old 11-11-2012, 07:32 PM   #20
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its someting wrong with the face, proportions maybe. Are those low field of view images because it looks rather flat.
 
Old 11-12-2012, 03:45 PM   #21
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Tank you guys! I will update soon. Yes, I use ortho view, perspective somehow looks strange with this character.
 
Old 11-12-2012, 04:22 PM   #22
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Aw,.. you fixed his nose!
Looks miles better.
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A photoshop update.

 
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Nice update!
Great work
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Nice update!
Great work

Thank you Kanga! Nice to hear from you, hehe.
 
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