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  06 June 2012
I like both set-ups with your Pontiac, believing that it would be better if not going for a too weathered photo look.

The first take of the car is technically better, while the sand could be more detailed - its shape is also more like coffee foam, overall too smooth (plus: the rear wheel isnít conveying the weight of the car). Some discolouration on the exhaust pipes could add to realism as well.

On the second take (which i see as the main picture of the presentation) there are still some black stripes around the windshield. The DOF is partially too strong and the sand issue is the same.(also donít forger the tiny reflections of the grains)

The model is nicely done - some edges could be smoother though (fender area and around the large front intakes)

Perhaps iíd try some colours for the sky (purple, brown/yellow, what ever) to get a more dramatic mood. Not forgetting then the reflections on the car. Not sure whether it works but..

here just quick test, concerning sky and mood:



Keep it up!

Last edited by zokana : 06 June 2012 at 01:10 PM.
 
  06 June 2012
@zokana
thank you very much for the detailled critique ,
rest assured that while i consider this piece done , and i have allready moved forward with other stuff,
i would look back at your critique for my next car rendering

i really like what you have done in your paint over , thank you


some progress on the pilot
 
  06 June 2012
Originally Posted by xtrm3d: yup ..
was right ... declined again


Something's wrong there, it's simply not comprehensible. There's so much stuff passing through (especially in the last time) that isn't on par with the level you're showing here... just keep doing your stuff, it's great!
 
  06 June 2012
Quote: Something's wrong there, it's simply not comprehensible. There's so much stuff passing through (especially in the last time) that isn't on par with the level you're showing here... just keep doing your stuff, it's great!


thanks you for the support ..
but what can i do ? reaally ssem that i did piss in someone cereal at some point ..
**** it

did try to contact a mod .. but seem that nobody can do something or want to go against the flow .

anyway ..


those boot are made for walking :-)

 
  06 June 2012
just realising that i never posted the 3d print result of teh red star 47



 
  06 June 2012
some pose test

 
  06 June 2012
Very Nice print
Where was that printed?
 
  06 June 2012
Quote: Very Nice print Where was that printed?


ownage
 
  06 June 2012
update on teh posing ..decimation master down from 20 millions to 600k

 
  06 June 2012
I love the dirt and grit on your car textures! Much more believable and "used." Someone had some fun driving that thing around. Can't wait to see a textured version of Red Star...that 3d print is really nice! Where did you get it done/how much was it if you don't mind me asking? Thanks, keep it up, really impressive stuff.
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  06 June 2012
the 3d print have been done by ownage ,
can't tell much about pricing since i do not deal with the $$ aspect
just contact them and ask for a quote


here some photos of the figures



 
  06 June 2012
I heard ownage has one the best quality/price ratio. They are located in china but the extra quality is worth the shipping. Also, they can hand paint your model for extra $$ and do a pretty god job at it
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  06 June 2012
Quote: I heard ownage has one the best quality/price ratio. They are located in china but the extra quality is worth the shipping. Also, they can hand paint your model for extra $$ and do a pretty god job at it


hear him !!hear him !! :-)

done with it .. just need some minor clean up .. and they are ready to print
yup i know .. the first one lost his jacket button ... ( they are hidden )




 
  06 June 2012
started on something new ....

 
  07 July 2012
added some leather , one never have enough leather
 
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