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Old 03-21-2012, 10:37 AM   #46
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Please send me a link, I cannot read the text, because too small.
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Old 03-21-2012, 11:38 AM   #47
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Eye close up and wet part


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Old 03-21-2012, 12:32 PM   #48
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Please send me a link, I cannot read the text, because too small.

Hehe, sorry this was a joke.
 
Old 03-22-2012, 06:18 PM   #49
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Old 03-24-2012, 03:18 PM   #50
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Height of character is 180 cm, the eye size is approximately 2,5 cm.
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Old 03-25-2012, 11:19 AM   #51
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Nice work on the eye socket!
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Old 03-25-2012, 11:28 AM   #52
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Saw this one a bit late.
Looking great! I love the natural appearance of the model and you have done a beautiful job on it. I like what Zokana said about the posture.

The rib cadge and profile of the arms look more slender than the front view. The connection of the upper arm layers look a bit off . At that intersection the bicep should be on the bottom, then the pectorals on top and last the deltoid on top of those. Also the shape of the bicep looks a bit off balance.

Love the back anatomy, well done!
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Old 03-25-2012, 02:15 PM   #53
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head changes:

eye: eyeball, cornea, iris, pupil
eyeball size approximately 2,5 cm
wet part
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Old 03-25-2012, 02:19 PM   #54
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Saw this one a bit late.
Looking great! I love the natural appearance of the model and you have done a beautiful job on it. I like what Zokana said about the posture.

The rib cadge and profile of the arms look more slender than the front view. The connection of the upper arm layers look a bit off . At that intersection the bicep should be on the bottom, then the pectorals on top and last the deltoid on top of those. Also the shape of the bicep looks a bit off balance.

Love the back anatomy, well done!
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Thanks for the useful comment!
I will check every parts.
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Old 03-25-2012, 03:12 PM   #55
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Some changes:

pelvis+torso correction
jaw position change and smoother
heel correction
chest little bigger
back little smaller
arm wider in side view

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Old 03-25-2012, 03:35 PM   #56
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The pose looks better now! (habár egy picit még mindig elöredugja a hátsófelét)

An other point in your task list could be the thickness/shapes of the extremities toward their end (the wrist is a bit filigree in side view - its rear side could get ‘extended’, and the ankles don’t look fully convincing in 1/4 views - the front between foot and shin special with that ‘streamlined’ outside of the foot.)

Otherwise lovely!
Keep it up!
 
Old 03-28-2012, 12:32 PM   #57
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The pose looks better now! (habár egy picit még mindig elöredugja a hátsófelét)

An other point in your task list could be the thickness/shapes of the extremities toward their end (the wrist is a bit filigree in side view - its rear side could get ‘extended’, and the ankles don’t look fully convincing in 1/4 views - the front between foot and shin special with that ‘streamlined’ outside of the foot.)

Otherwise lovely!
Keep it up!


Thanks for your advice! Now I finished the base mesh.
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Old 03-28-2012, 12:42 PM   #58
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Now I finished the base body mesh. If I have time later I will sculpt it and I will also make textures.

The body is available at TurboSquid

motion test: walking









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Old 04-03-2012, 06:13 AM   #59
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