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  03 March 2012
Please send me a link, I cannot read the text, because too small.
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  03 March 2012
Eye close up and wet part


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  03 March 2012
Originally Posted by artofillusionist: Please send me a link, I cannot read the text, because too small.

Hehe, sorry this was a joke.
 
  03 March 2012
Height of character is 180 cm, the eye size is approximately 2,5 cm.
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  03 March 2012
Nice work on the eye socket!
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  03 March 2012
Saw this one a bit late.
Looking great! I love the natural appearance of the model and you have done a beautiful job on it. I like what Zokana said about the posture.

The rib cadge and profile of the arms look more slender than the front view. The connection of the upper arm layers look a bit off . At that intersection the bicep should be on the bottom, then the pectorals on top and last the deltoid on top of those. Also the shape of the bicep looks a bit off balance.

Love the back anatomy, well done!
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  03 March 2012
head changes:

eye: eyeball, cornea, iris, pupil
eyeball size approximately 2,5 cm
wet part
eyebone changes
nose changes
jaw changes
mouth+teeth





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Last edited by artofillusionist : 03 March 2012 at 03:15 PM.
 
  03 March 2012
Originally Posted by Kanga: Saw this one a bit late.
Looking great! I love the natural appearance of the model and you have done a beautiful job on it. I like what Zokana said about the posture.

The rib cadge and profile of the arms look more slender than the front view. The connection of the upper arm layers look a bit off . At that intersection the bicep should be on the bottom, then the pectorals on top and last the deltoid on top of those. Also the shape of the bicep looks a bit off balance.

Love the back anatomy, well done!
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Thanks for the useful comment!
I will check every parts.
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  03 March 2012
Some changes:

pelvis+torso correction
jaw position change and smoother
heel correction
chest little bigger
back little smaller
arm wider in side view

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Last edited by artofillusionist : 03 March 2012 at 03:16 PM.
 
  03 March 2012
The pose looks better now! (habár egy picit még mindig elöredugja a hátsófelét)

An other point in your task list could be the thickness/shapes of the extremities toward their end (the wrist is a bit filigree in side view - its rear side could get ‘extended’, and the ankles don’t look fully convincing in 1/4 views - the front between foot and shin special with that ‘streamlined’ outside of the foot.)

Otherwise lovely!
Keep it up!
 
  03 March 2012
Originally Posted by zokana: The pose looks better now! (habár egy picit még mindig elöredugja a hátsófelét)

An other point in your task list could be the thickness/shapes of the extremities toward their end (the wrist is a bit filigree in side view - its rear side could get ‘extended’, and the ankles don’t look fully convincing in 1/4 views - the front between foot and shin special with that ‘streamlined’ outside of the foot.)

Otherwise lovely!
Keep it up!


Thanks for your advice! Now I finished the base mesh.
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  03 March 2012
Now I finished the base body mesh. If I have time later I will sculpt it and I will also make textures.

The body is available at TurboSquid

motion test: walking









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