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  04 April 2018
Container Spaceship

Update # 3 : I've worked more on the textures and normals map. Here are some colored shots.

Update #2 : I decided on the main design, so I am working on the medium to small details. I made the frame more sturdy, added some
catwalk on the sides, and alot of other things. Here it is.


Update #1 : Hello. I am building a cargo container ship spaceship. I would like to get some feedback on the general design. What do you think of the shape of the front and back? What would you add to make it cooler? I wanted to give it a sort of skeletal/ Vulnerable design to show that its not a combat ship like alot of other spacecraft.









Last edited by skywalker113 : 05 May 2018 at 11:50 PM. Reason: Updates
 
  04 April 2018
I understand that you are aiming for a skeletal/vulnerable design, but my only criticism at the moment would be that it seems too flimsy. I feel that the containers would barely stay in place should something even bump into them. I would at least add some more skeletal/ribs so that the containers don't fly out of place.

The front looks solid. Of course this is a general design, so as it progresses, it will be easier to to point out specific things. I would say that at the moment, it's tough to tell if the 4 cylinders are engines or fuel pods on the back. It would be cool also to consider adding fuel tanks all around the spaceship, to give it a more container ship feel that's built with pragmatism in design and not looks/warfare.

Great work so far, keep at it!
 
  04 April 2018
Thanks for the feedback. I decided on the main design, so I am working on the medium to small details. I made the frame more sturdy, added some catwalk on the sides, and alot of other things. Here it is.









Last edited by skywalker113 : 04 April 2018 at 09:16 AM.
 
  05 May 2018
I've worked more on the textures and normals map. Here are some colored shots.






 
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