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Old 03-29-2011, 06:33 PM   #1
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Character: Female with weapon

Decided to make a character for games. IŽll let you follow from start to finish and all C&C is appreciated. My goal is to get some kind of cg-job and I hope for this character to help with that.
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Old 03-29-2011, 06:39 PM   #2
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concept

This is what iŽm going for.
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Old 03-29-2011, 08:41 PM   #3
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body base for sculpting

Done a mesh to start sculpting from.
C&C is very much appreciated.
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Old 03-30-2011, 12:59 AM   #4
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a few new meshes..

Added pants, t-top and a hat.
Glowes, boots, belt etc. still to be made..
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Old 03-30-2011, 03:53 AM   #5
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Hey Smas, that's a pretty no nonsense looking woman you've got happening, good stuff. There's a couple of small things that caught my eye, primarily the position of her head. It seems she's angling her head a bit too far forward, like she's got a bit of a hunchback happening. Also there's a bit of an odd crease on the upper / outer parts of her breasts where they meet the pectoral muscles. Her hips look a tad boxy to me, but that's more just personal preference I think. Otherwise I like the general shapes you have setup, she should look pretty good as work progresses.

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Old 03-30-2011, 10:01 AM   #6
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Thumbs up C&C reply

Hey rtrska, thank you!
First reply and allready some realy good C&C, perfect!
All you say make sense to me and iŽll keep it in mind.
Hope to be back with more stuff tonight or tomorrow.
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Old 03-30-2011, 11:29 PM   #7
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Weapon

When starting on the holster I didnŽt find any good/appealing ref-images.
Decided to pic a gun and do my own holster for that.
So hereŽs the gun. Just the basic proportions and shape.
Now IŽll be able to start on the holster.
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Old 03-31-2011, 01:54 PM   #8
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more..

the holster and boots.
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Old 04-01-2011, 04:33 PM   #9
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Thumbs down gah..

Did some sculpting and every time I try to make her look mean. She automagicly becomes a man :(
..iŽll beter get some reference for mean women
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Old 04-02-2011, 06:24 AM   #10
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Women are tricky to get looking attractive, yet tough or aggressive. Its often a few subtle things that are all that's necessary. A slight sneer, or even just "mean" looking eyebrows are often enough to get the idea across.
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Old 04-07-2011, 07:46 PM   #11
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another try..

This is last nights work. Still not good but itŽll do for now. C&C please
Moving on to the body.
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Old 04-08-2011, 01:52 AM   #12
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I think maybe her chin is a bit big as you've got it, and the mouth and nose could be slightly enlarged. This pic is kind of what I'd do, but I didn't have enough time to really finesse it.



Anyhow, I hope you don't mind me smearing your character's face around like this
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Old 04-08-2011, 03:24 AM   #13
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smearalot

You can smear how much you want! IŽm greatful to get some feedback.
Hope to be back with more updates tomorrow.
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Old 04-09-2011, 12:43 AM   #14
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bodysculpting

Done some sculpting on the body.
Think iŽll leave it like this for now and move on to the clothes.
Just check proportions first
Later I can focus on the visible bodyparts and refine those
And once again all comments are wellcome!
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Old 01-19-2012, 06:02 PM   #15
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the gun

update on the gun
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