Pick-up Chevy Avalanche, Wagner Senior (3d)

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  04 April 2017
Pick-up Chevy Avalanche, Wagner Senior (3d)



Title: Pick-up Chevy Avalanche

Name: Wagner Senior



 
  06 June 2017
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Midtones seem a little milky. Need a touch of S-curve cine gamma love in AE to punch it up.

The rims are too hot and lack detail.

The tires seem a little flat. For a photoshoot, they probably would be treated with a silicone tire treatment to make them rich black. Also, I don't see any branding. No tire has smooth sides.

Also the wheel wells are too well lit. My eye is unnecessarily drawn to it.

The double light reflection the front fender is distracting. It looks like pin stripe decals.

The front grill seems like its lit too head-on and flat.

The refraction in the side windows is weird. It is a reflection, or the inside of the truck being very very warped? (Or maybe the cab is filled with water?? )

Lack of shadow underneath (even if it's physically accurate) make it look off.
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