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  12 December 2017
It's hard to give feedback without knowing anything about these characters, who they are, what role they play in the story, what the premise is, etc.
  12 December 2017

Accountant who steal client's money.He is deeply in debt.

Thanks nice feedback.

I attach story to sketch.
  12 December 2017
That's not much to go on, but at least we know who that one character is (although you already posted a bunch of other characters who we know nothing about, or what the basic premise of the story is even about). Overall I think you have a distinct style in your character designs, and I don't see any egregious problems. Whether the designs are appealing is a subjective matter, and has a lot to do with how well the style matches the tone of the story.

One thing you do have to be careful about, is when a style has built-in quirky proportions as part of the signature look, it can be difficult to depict characters who are supposed to be objectively attractive. We see this problem often in even famous I.P.s (intellectual properties). You might want to experiment with trying to depict characters like that and see if your chosen style will limit your ability to depict such characters.
  12 December 2017

suitman He has trouble with the left hand. IQ 120

To tell the truth,I don't think the basic premise of the storyyet. As for drawing style , I forget drawing technique because I could not use time for drawing.

I decide drawing style after 3 month.My aiming is Def Darrow + Philip K Dick.

  12 December 2017

Drug milk machine Cow's lifetime is ten days
  12 December 2017

Soldier He can't understand literature.
  12 December 2017

Creature that evolve from insect Weak point is cold.
  12 December 2017

Fridge robot This robot stoppedproduction in 3 days.
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