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Old 08 August 2013   #1
Cartoon Soccer Gnome - feedback please

Hey everyone,
I've just recently started to use a tablet and practice my digital drawing skills, so I'm looking for honest feedback on my work. I'm trying to design some fantasy soccer players (cartoon style) and started off with a female gnome.

I'm quite alright with the expression and pose, but I'm still insecure about coloring and shadows. Do you have any suggestions for me what/how to improve?

Thanks in advance,
Amonbell

 
Old 08 August 2013   #2
Originally Posted by Amonbell: Hey everyone,
I've just recently started to use a tablet and practice my digital drawing skills, so I'm looking for honest feedback on my work. I'm trying to design some fantasy soccer players (cartoon style) and started off with a female gnome.

I'm quite alright with the expression and pose, but I'm still insecure about coloring and shadows. Do you have any suggestions for me what/how to improve?

Thanks in advance,
Amonbell




looks nice but the color scheme not to good. Try eliminating the green background as it takes up the character. Becauase my eyes only focus on the green background. I hope this helps, take care for now.
 
Old 08 August 2013   #3
Thank you! The background is just work in progress, I intend to draw a soccer field. You're definitely right, I'll try to get rid of that as soon as possible. Is the color choice of the character also faulty or only in comparison to the background?
 
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