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  05 May 2013
The Road of Dreams

The Road of Dreams
  06 June 2013

The only thing that jumps out to me is the repetitive nature of the torches. They're so big they seem unnatural to be that close together. Perhaps you could space them out a lot more? Good luck!
Bryan Beus
Artist and forthcoming author.
  06 June 2013
I think if you moved the figure a bit more to the left, or have the ground under him reflect a bit more light, it'll create better readability by contrasting the dark silhouette of the figure with the lighter background immediately around him.

The image itself feels like some kind of surreal scene, but it's really the giant torches that convey this. My suggestion is to add a bit more to this scene so the torches aren't the only subtle clues to the surreal nature of the premise. I don't know if you have a specific narrative for this that you need to be faithful to, but if not, maybe you can add something more fantastical, such as a floating cube in the sky, or the road leads to a giant tower the extends all the way into the heavens, or the road curves up and goes all the way into the clouds, etc.
  06 June 2013
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