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Old 05-18-2013, 09:00 PM   #16
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Ghost could use some overall anatomy study. Right now his shoulders are really high giving him no neck. His face is asymmetrical. His expression however is good. It has a lot of feeling in it.

I think drawing the entire body even, if you don't intend to show it, will help you pull him together.
 
Old 05-20-2013, 12:35 PM   #17
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Zosci- I totally get your point about "lost in the details" now and I understand. I will definitely keep that in mind for future projects.

Lunatique/tibbi- I love your comments on ghost. They make complete sense! I've been trying to figure out what looks weird about it and you definitely helped. I did in fact paint in Ghost's entire body, keeping in mind anatomy, proportions, fur, but it's all hidden behind Jon.

Lunatique/Zosci-Great points on more room in the composition. A very easy fix and I will be sure to apply that for the (hopefully) last revision.

Ill have to show you what this originally looked like(before I posted it on this forum). It's insane at how bad it was in the beginning. Since then, I kept noticing problems popping up, changing them, then moving forward, then noticing more problems, changing them, moving forward....so on and on and on. Haha its been a headache. But, during this process, I feel I learned a ton and for that very fact, my lack of a consistant/quick workflow/others is justified because I'm a hell of a lot better painter/artist than I was 3 months ago. BUT there is still much to learn.

Thanks so much guys for commenting and sharing your crits. I honestly feel you've made me soo much better. If we were in the same room, I'd wanna shake your hand or give you a hug. Whichever you prefer....or a beer
 
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