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Old 01-15-2013, 09:38 AM   #1
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So this one was declined for the 2D gallery... Maybe some advice might help? Thanks.
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So was this one.

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I love your illustrative qualities. The bottom bad wolf is my favorite!

What kind of advice you need for the top one? The tail could be seperated from resting against his body and the feathers on the top back of his head make it kind of busy. I also like the pyramid triangular effect you have here. Where are his teeth? If he is howling his lips could be more forward.
 
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