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Old 12 December 2012   #1
My spaceship need help!


looking for some advice.
THX!

PS. I wonder why there is no reply T_T
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Old 12 December 2012   #2
Lens flare effect is not helping. Is very distracting above all the 4 circles clustered together.

Some ideas:
Bring foreground (bottom right corner) much closer to the camera.

Make the ship engine bigger and brighter

There is something disturbing about those two bridges parallel to the border and exactly at same level as the horizon. Move them up?
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Old 01 January 2013   #3
Oh good ideas
I will change my picture
Thank you very much !
 
Old 02 February 2013   #4
The visual weight of your composition isn't very well balanced right now. A possibility is to extend your canvas on the right and bottom, so we see a lot more of the structure the figures are standing on, to counter the weight of the spaceship and establish your premise/scene wit more interesting detail.
 
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