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Old 11-22-2012, 11:08 PM   #1
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little shepherdess

France 1764 little shepherdess the story of the tragic deaths in the village of Gevaudan
Old 11-22-2012, 11:47 PM   #2
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Old 12-07-2012, 12:54 AM   #3
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Her hands look a bit unnatural, and her left hand is especially strange--almost as if it's slightly deformed. Can you post a much bigger version so I can troubleshoot the hand more closely?

The lighting in the scene looks a bit inconsistent too, between the sheep on the left, the girl, and the sheep on the right. If this is supposed to be a very diffused lighting with a blanket of overcast clouds, then we shouldn't even be seeing distinct cast shadows--they'd be just a vague, soft blur. We also shouldn't be seeing strong form shadows like we do on the sheep on the left, since the sky would be like a giant softbox that lights everything evenly, from all direction, except from the bottom.
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