Digital Painting - Landscapes

Hi guys!
Here two digital paintings that i made in 30-45 min.I'm a beginner how you can see
On the right it's a landscape that I paint from a reference while on the left I made it myself
I'd like critiques especially on the landscape on the left.

Don't use a lot of stringy, thin brushstrokes unless you know why you're doing it. Thick and thin brushstrokes create different types of surfaces, and usually you want to use large brushstrokes for the general forms, and then progressively smaller brushstrokes to depict more and more detail. You also want to be careful about having really sharp brushstrokes laid on top of very blurry ones if they are the same plane/surface--it'll look very awkward if they aren't depicting two totally different levels of macro and micro detail.

Thanks Lunatique for your comment
Next time i use your advices.

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