Bookcover - Marked by the gods

Become a member of the CGSociety

Connect, Share, and Learn with our Large Growing CG Art Community. It's Free!

THREAD CLOSED
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 11 November 2012   #1
Bookcover - Marked by the gods

Here's my first finished work!
I'm about to graduate in Design, and I need to create a good portfolio.
What do you people think? Thanks for any feedback! I have a lot to learn from you yet!






It's a book cover for a personal project, called "The parth of the wanderer". The character is a misterious wanderer, who might be part of an ancient and forgotten legend that the Empire tried to destroy. It's a fantasy with chinese, tibetan, japanese and other oriental influences. Hope you like it!
 
Old 11 November 2012   #2
His rump seems to lack a sense of volume. Athletic folks such as warriors tend to have very muscular and prominent butts.

The turning of the form at the belt area and below also doesn't seem to match his body that well (the waist is not a round cylinder--it has planes). The torso also seems a little long.

The way the hair obscures the readability of the contour of his head is a bit unfortunate.
 
Old 11 November 2012   #3
Thread automatically closed

This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.
 
Thread Closed share thread



Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
CGSociety
Society of Digital Artists
www.cgsociety.org

Powered by vBulletin
Copyright 2000 - 2006,
Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Minimize Ads
Forum Jump
Miscellaneous

All times are GMT. The time now is 09:12 PM.


Powered by vBulletin
Copyright ©2000 - 2017, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.