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Old 10-02-2012, 03:44 PM   #1
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hi, this is a piece that i am currently working on. critiques are most welcome.
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Old 10-02-2012, 04:00 PM   #2
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It's looking pretty great!

The image is pretty low dpi so maybe the bad jpeg artifacting is distorting things. But as it is, the rider could stand out a lot more as the focal point with some brighter highlights.

Contrast control is your friend. Lighter lights and darker darks on your desired focal points well help direct the viewer.
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