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Old 10-01-2012, 07:27 AM   #1
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Hi

This concept art i did for zbrush model...pls suggest me to i am right way or not...always wlc ur C&C

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Old 10-01-2012, 07:35 PM   #2
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Since this will eventually be a 3d model, I think you'll work a lot of the issues out on your own. About the only thing I see that you could improve is the creatures anatomy.

It's not that the anatomy is wrong, since this is an imagined creature, but the placement of some features isn't suggestive of the rounded form I think you're aiming for.

The features in question seem to have a leftward lean starting with the spear gripping arm, the creature's right eye, and chest anatomy. It's almost more of an issue with drawing in perspective than lack of anatomical knowledge.

But like I said, once you start modeling and can move the figure in 3d space, these problems will work themselves out.
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Old 10-04-2012, 12:18 PM   #3
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Hi Josh Hass,

Thanks for ur sagetions sure i will correct it while start my 3d model work

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Old 10-04-2012, 06:50 PM   #4
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A few suggestions.

1) Put it in the 3D section

2) Link your pictures directly here. You will not get much feedback if you expect people to go to your blog to see the pictures.

3) Avoid the SMS short-forms, not everyone understand them, even for English speakers, much less others, & some people dislike them . When people do not understand, or dislike the SMS shortform, people do not comment on your thread, simple as that.
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Old 10-05-2012, 03:26 PM   #5
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Hi Kiadaw Phua,

Thanks for your suggestions sure i will post all working progress images in 3D section
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