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Old 04-18-2017, 06:19 PM   #1
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Star Wars light transport ship concept

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Here is a concept ship drawing I've been working on and off for some time now. I'm doing 3d so this was an in between project to practice drawing. Any comments are welcome.


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Old 04-20-2017, 02:19 AM   #2
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Look fine to me, especially since you are the one to turn it into 3D, you already have a good idea of how to define a lot of the details, thus don't need to define them more in the concept art itself. Doing concept art for your own 3D work is different from doing it for other people, because other people can't read your mind, so you have to spell out as much detail in the concept art as they need to create a good 3D version. If this was done as concept art for other people, I would suggest that the smaller details of the forms that currently look very flat could be defined more with lighting information, so the forms read more clearly.
 
Old 04-20-2017, 08:43 PM   #3
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Thanks for the comments. Much appreciated. I'm still working on a side view and a back 3/4 to show the engine detail but don't have the time to sit down and finish it. I wanted to post what I have to see if this is going in the right direction. Thanks again for the helpful remarks.
 
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