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Old 04-07-2017, 11:35 PM   #1
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Need Help With My Environment

Hello folks! Here is an environment that I have been stumped on. Parts of the image still seem a little rough. I would love to hear any critique on it. Thank you!
 
Old 04-08-2017, 02:53 AM   #2
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What don't you like about it currently? What are you aiming for?

It seems you're going for a simplified style, and overall it does seem pretty cohesive. The surfaces properties are a bit too similar/homogenized to my eyes, and I would try to differentiate the textures of the different surface types a bit more. The water could use some ripples/reflections to make it look more like water. Sky can be refined a bit. Foliage is a bit too chunky/blobby in some areas, and could use a bit more refinement.
 
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@Lunatique , thank you for the generous feedback! This helps out a lot! I will surely address these areas.
Cheers!
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Interesting image! Great starting point but create more visual interest! Tell a more captivating story about these people.
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