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  05 May 2008
Work In Progress: reflections



added reflections...

how far am i from ending it?:P
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  05 May 2008
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hi.
good start. I like the overall composition and colors.
I have also some advices:
- give more depth to your image by showing some vertical structures in the background
- get rid of the water - doen't help. or make the reflections work.
- add some more movement to the image by showing some smoketrails to the bike
- that exploding thingie is not good at all. work on it.

I hope is not too much.
I wish you good luck and I hope that u will be among winners!
keep it up man!
cheers
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  05 May 2008
silenceimpaired thx glad u like it

bechira thx for the crits .idd im tring to make the refl work atm .im adding something to the bike so it gives it more movement . i kinda like the explosion and gonna try adding more depth!

dont be shy with crits...as long as i can fix things im listening

ms d crits
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  05 May 2008
Work In Progress: more



added some islands
needed now some details..atmosphere between bike and islands and more details:)
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  05 May 2008
Work In Progress: close



ok close to raping this up..i hope:)
wanna add an island under that ship cos i dont want that explosion reflection...

am i close? which 1 u guys like more...bring in the crits :)
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  05 May 2008
Originally Posted by jonone:
ok close to raping this up..i hope


lol!! wrapping it up! "raping" means something else.

cool image, i love it! just don't rape it :P

Last edited by JackZhang : 05 May 2008 at 03:40 AM.
 
  05 May 2008
First thought was left...

The problem with left is there is all this open sky.... with the right, you have the ship top left, and it leads your eyes down to the action. My vote is right, and very very impressive drawing.
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  05 May 2008
JackZhang hehe it was like 3 in the morning was faling asleep,normally id write wrap it up)) thx glad u like it not raped)


silenceimpaire i like the 1 on the right to

tx for passing by,keep the crits coming ,got some things to solve and tonight ill do final adjustments so crit crit crit
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  05 May 2008
Work In Progress: almost there



k almost there..just need to figure out if i mirror it or elave it like this and a few more refinements...off for now
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  05 May 2008
very cool indeed! waiting to see the final! go go go!
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  05 May 2008
Final Image: All within her hands



As she got further away from the ship her thoughts stayed aboard the Streaker.Everything that happened since they arrived on this forgotten “metal” planet Kithrup poped up bombarding her with thoughts,the loss of half the crew,the alien fleets still fighting for what is onboard the Streaker, the 6 alien scout ships searching the behemoth wreck for any place they could have hidden in.How will they reach Earth with entire alien fleets following them trough the galaxies, all wanting one thing... Her thoughts were shattered in an instant by a growling sound….imediatly she turned her head towards the behemoth wreck hoping for another crash from the outerspace battle or a late explosion,but her fears came true..Streaker was being attacked by one of the alien scout ships ,with its plasma shields going off in aureal explosions with each laser hit . There was no time to loose ,it all layed on her shoulders now.She was sure Tom would elude the scouts but for how long?She had to hurry and plant the psi bomb which would distract and lead the aliens away to a false track.From there on who knows what the gods had planed for them…

This is my final image.Thanks to all that stoped by ,much appreciated .GL:)
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  05 May 2008
it turned out very nice dude good job on it,nice story to good luck with it
 
  05 May 2008
thx vady

btw my inspiration for this image was Startide Rising of David Brin doh
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  05 May 2008
Great final you ended up with.
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  05 May 2008
thx martin
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