Strange Behavior (Illustration) Entry: Ramón Acedo

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  07 July 2007
bunny is the man buddy.concept and sketch both are looking good.Looking forward to see more.Best of luck.
 
  07 July 2007
the tie looks great... gives him class and adds to the attitude... keep it up
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  07 July 2007
hey hey , I'm not alone starting painting ! Great.
Your right about saturation in your description. The green is a bit cold and poor here.
Keep good job !
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  07 July 2007
lol this is great, sweet concept love it
 
  07 July 2007
Thumbs up read them and weep, no cheating

Wow! One of the strangest and funniest entries so far.

I really like your main character. His expression is awesome.

Composition-wise however, I thing that you have to much empty space on the top.

Also, the lower right guy, kind of gets cut weird.

Maybe if you expanded the canvas to the right a little, to incorporate a little of his right shoulder would fix that.

The snail character by the way is great, he deserves his own TV show!!!



I’m really psyched to see where the piece will go!



Keep up the great work!









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  07 July 2007
Looking very good, Ramón. Ánimo!!
 
  07 July 2007
The guy on the left looks like general grevious. I like your concept, but having all the strange creatures together brings it a bit too much into the realm of fantasy to consider this 'strange behavior' for surely such behaviour would be normal in this world? Maybe if you made the rabbit photorealistic.....
 
  07 July 2007
Line Art or Model: Stupid, stupid rabitt creature



Jimbo is cheating! this is what I want to be the focal point of the image, i think it will be the most difficult part to render too. We'll see. Thank you for your feedback guys, tomorrow I will try to answer all of you. I think I will add more space on the image to the right to define better the freaks there.
Ok see you ...
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  07 July 2007
Thumbs up hi

This is excellent. His beverage can be some kind of carrot cocktail, or like bloody marry with carrot instead of tomato(you can call it -not so bloody marry any more- )

Keep up good work.

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  07 July 2007
WOW . . . love the reflection of the cards. Perfect incorporation too!
 
  07 July 2007
wow this is such a cool concept, cant wait to see the next update! I'm a big fan of your stuff, truly an inspiration!

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  07 July 2007
Ramon....I always enjoy your stuff, but a bunny with an attitude.....great!

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  07 July 2007
Thumbs up :)

Brilliant! I too love the reflections in the window - I almost missed them but then once I see them - totally funny. I am not sure have you decided to crop in or are you just showing us a close up? I enjoy the new crop if you are - I still see what is going on with out all the other characters - and makes it easier to focus actually.

I love you style. Can't wait to see where else you take it. A tleast you have a clear direction - I am not sure I like any of the 4 sketched I have !

I will keep watching your thread!
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  07 July 2007
cute cute cute
 
  07 July 2007
Gord-MacDonald
Thanks Gord, I'll do my best

CUBISIS
Thank you very much, I expect you will be able to see much more

icedeyes
Yeah, I think the tie will help to make him more nerdish

Deevad
This is the fun part, the image will change a lot, as you can see I am beginning to correct the lack of saturation, that's a usual fault of mine at the first stages of my work. There's still a long road ahead.

Ivy00

Thankee

NomadSoul2501
Don´t worry about the lower right guy, I'm gonna change him, Im not at all happy with his looks. I agree maybe there should be more space to the right. About the top of the image I like it that way, after all the very top and the bottom will be in shadows, somehow framing the focal point, Jimbo and his reflection. The difficult part will be integrating all the characters on the scene without making it too confusing. I expect colours to help on that.

I want the snail like character to be somewhat translucid or transparent to make him more freaky.

Nigio
Gracias compadre!

paperclip
Well, I don´t know where's the limit on normal and strange behavior, You are right in considering that if everything is weird then it should be considered "normal" though. The point is: have you ever seen a nerd bunny on any space canteen?

DaveClarke
Yeah, maybe I should introduce a carrot somewhere

eclipse115
Thanks Lindsey

ChemicalSmile
Wow, you gonna make blush


Wordzmith
Yeah, I think bunnies are the most absurd creatures ever you could find

halvarado
Thanks, it's only a closeup, I love your stuff too, congratulations on Exposé 5

alvin-cgi
Yeah, yeah, yeah




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