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Old 08-08-2007, 06:35 PM   #61
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Hi Dude! I really liked your Nocturnal Flight concept. It is very expressive. good luck!
 
Old 08-09-2007, 07:44 AM   #62
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Hi Ferx:

That is a very nice composition. I like the atmposphere that you put in the forest and river, very nice. Really good work mate! I want to see the drainage idea! I believe can be great
 
Old 08-09-2007, 11:04 AM   #63
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Thant's a great composition. nice job! i like the circular effect and the wood in the FG... no critique for you my friend, drawings are vry nice aswell, keep it up
 
Old 08-09-2007, 11:16 AM   #64
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very nice work so far Fernando... I really like this composition a lot more... you could emphasize scale and depth you could add one of the dragonflies barelly escapping the mouth of a gator... repetition on different scales is a great way to show depth... use your composition and horizon lines to see what the scale of a drtagonfly would be compared to a gaator or maybe just compare it with his eye... just some suggestions... keep it up...
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Old 08-09-2007, 03:37 PM   #65
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Good job Ferx! . The characters feels much more cohesive to each other. Nice work on composition as well. cant wait for the colored version..

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Old 08-09-2007, 11:52 PM   #66
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I agree with the others - this new composition looks excellent. Really grabs attention My only concern is that the leading ant/dragonfly is overlapping the crocodile a little bit too much for my preferences, but I'm being very fussy here and it's not really a big concern. Wonderful update!
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Old 08-10-2007, 07:19 AM   #67
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Oh yes!

I totally agree with these nice comments Very good work. Those crocodiles look very nasty.
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Old 08-10-2007, 08:22 PM   #68
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Rodolfo - Thanks man!! Yes, I like much that idea, and I have not left it completely, but the time advances ...

Grako - Thanks buddy !! I´m working in the drainage scenary

Jeff- Thanks for your kind words! my friend !! Thanks for your encouragement!!

George - Thanks mate!! fore sure I take all your suggestions and put in practice for the next update. Again really thanks !!

Mark - Really thanks friend ! I´m taking note of your suggestion for the next update

Raffy - I'm glad you liked ! Thanks for the support !

Martin - Thanks man!! I really appreciate your words!
 
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HI Fer!!!
Now that you're changing settings you will surely improve the scene a lot! Goood!
The swamp scene looks very good to me, but let's see the drainage one, which I think would match the extreme sport theme better. Great Update!!
If any, I'd say that you have two of the crocodiles heads in a complete front angle, maybe you could turn the middle one's head a little to the right or something. I don't know.....

See you! Have fun!!
 
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Hey Gabriel, really thanks! Again you are right for sure i follow your advice!! thanks!!
I'm workin in the drainage... i hope the pre visual be ready for this weekend...
 
Old 08-14-2007, 07:14 PM   #71
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very original, sobretodo los instectos! :P
that sketch is great, I would like to see the next steps painting the image.
 
Old 08-15-2007, 12:33 AM   #72
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Agree with SteevieWoo for the crocodile heads and with Mdavid for the overlappi,g thing,but hey just being very fussy to me.huhu..this is coming out better and better!Keep 'm coming
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Concept Sketch or 3D pre-visualization: The Drainage



I´m work a lot in the drainage variation for the ant surfers ... hahahah... :D
I wanted to pre visualize the complete atmosphere, to be able to present the idea and compare it against the composition of the marsh. I had to paint enough to be able to have a good idea of this scene. The ants, dragonflys and crocodiles need to be redrawed to improve the perspective and the composition, but being a previsualization I use again everything the elements that already I had (that lazy I am… hahahahaha)

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Old 08-16-2007, 04:54 AM   #74
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Sweet!! this one looks good, the only bad thing I find is that it would have no moon
No matter which way you go from here, you already have a very solid piece with beautiful elements and design. So..... Go crazy and keep the good stuff coming!!
 
Old 08-16-2007, 07:35 AM   #75
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José - Gracias !! I posted a new one with colour Thanks again man!!

Remko - Thanks for your encouragement. Yep, I need to redraw the croc on the middle. In the last update I used a more wide canvas in order to avoid the over lapping ... Thanks again mate !

Gabriel - Really thanks friend !!, you are a great support and a great pressure to make the things better!! Yes, I also miss the moon ... I believe that I go to make an opening in the ceiling of the drainage ... ...
 
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