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Old 07-25-2007, 03:14 AM   #31
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Making a reflection about my idea. At the start I thought that perhaps it was not a strange behavior, but what be more stranger than ants amusing itself instead of being working! , to be in an underground ambient and not in the discipline . If one thinks about an insect, in a working animal, We almost for sure think about ants or bees. What I need is to emphasize this concept within my idea of surfers ants.
 
Old 07-25-2007, 01:28 PM   #32
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Hola Fernando, I like your ideas and sketches so far but I dont think your last previsualization works, you are leading the eye to the center of the composition insead of the focal points, the moon is to close to the right border and characters are aligned with eac other, also dragonflies are in the same Z axis, one should be near and one should be far of the spectator for the kind of composition you are making. I know this is just a previzualisation but those are my two cents, is just a matter of move and scale some objects. Best regards mate, looking forward for your updates
 
Old 07-25-2007, 06:11 PM   #33
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Hola Reinaldo, Yes, you are right. This is only a previsualization, but Im taking note about your comments, really thanks!! For sure i need to previsualize all the composition. Im working now in the subjects and elements for the illustration. Im thinking in a much wider image to manage the composition that i want. Again, gracias!!
 
Old 07-26-2007, 11:12 AM   #34
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oh man! a very unique idea! i think if you leave it as a natural water area, it'd be a lot more suitable though, IMO...but a very interesting idea! keep it up!
 
Old 07-27-2007, 01:56 AM   #35
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Hey Ferx I really love the main concept you adapted choosing ants and considering them as the masters of the earth as they really are just imagine if they knew that and acted according to it, I think that would be extremely hilarious and funny , cant wait to see progress here.

Good luck man
 
Old 07-27-2007, 09:07 AM   #36
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hye mate tha`nks for droppijg by mine... your current composition looks great. love the setting very much. night time and contrast of nature and industrial.... adds that extra something t the whole image.... will be keeping an eye n thius
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Hola Fenando! I like a lot all your last concept!, maybe certanly I would change the moon of position, but the idea is very nice and fun!!!...Suerte!!
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Old 07-28-2007, 12:00 AM   #38
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Hola Fernando,
I like your style, very fun ideas all of them! I like mostly the flying lizard, the ant and the, wasp, they seem to be a nice way to approach, the challenge, I also like the last composition had the best mood, having said that, I think you juts have to do some experiments with such mood, maybe even adding the castle of the ants in the bg and the queen in her balcony, but just an idea I had while I was watching all your great sketches! Have Fun, and I will be checking for upgrades and supporting the Gang! Jaja!
 
Old 07-28-2007, 05:24 AM   #39
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Hi Fernando,

Ideas and pre-viz are coming all together well. cant wait to see the composition.
Keep it coming my friend and Good luck!

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Hey Fernando,

I really like your ideas, especially the last one but as Reinaldo said, you should work on the composition a bit more... Since its just previz, i am sure you will make it better... keep it up
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Old 07-28-2007, 11:18 AM   #41
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bluemattersoda - Thanks mate ! Yep, you are right, maybe need more open water. Ok I moving the cliffs

MoKhatib - Thx for your words man The ants rulers of the world , perhaps that is a true and not a strange behavior ..... hahahaha ... I continue exploring the idea

W-I-L - Really thanks Will. I keeping an eye on your entry for sure !


LauJ - Gracias Laura !! Yes, you are right , I need to work on the composition before continuing advancing on the concept

AxelAlonso - Gracias Axel !. The castell idea is great, surely I am going to consider it. Thx again !!

idyeaah - Thanks man!! Working now on the composition, I hope to soon have an advance and a new update

icedeyes - Thanks man! You are right, as I said to Lau, I need to work on the composition before continuing the development of the concept. Thanks again mate !
 
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surfs up dude!! coooooooooooool! love the red dragonfly's bobby eyes! the motionblur on the flapping wings are really cool! me waiting for more updates good luck my friend!
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Concept Sketch or 3D pre-visualization: Surfers - new composition



Im playing a bit with the composition with the elements that i have. Open the water zone and change position of the surfers and the moon. Im thinking in a more wider frame...
 
Old 07-29-2007, 07:27 AM   #44
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Neville, Thanks a lot my friend !! your words always support me, I do not deserve it
You rocks man !! Thx!
 
Old 07-29-2007, 08:14 AM   #45
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good mate.. make it wider.. although i [preffered your other composistion.. the leader was more the centra of attention
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