Strange Behavior (Animation) Entry: Kieran Tether

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Old 07 July 2007   #16
the t-shirt looks a bit strange around the neck, apart from that good model
idea is nice too.
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Old 07 July 2007   #17
the model looks just great except from the area ania mentioned... it might be the angle though... great work
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Old 07 July 2007   #18
great modeling.

but the t-shirt really looks too strange cause no stretch is able to show that much shape of the muscles. Especially without any rinckles.

maybe you'll fix it during the posing.

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Old 07 July 2007   #19
flaeticia , ania , icedeyes, nothingness : Thank you .

For the neck area, yea weird I think I just winged it and probably made the shape wrong for the collar. Thanks for noticing

Yea, I will be going wrinkles and making it look more like a shirt once I have it posed and can take it into some kind sculpting program (but maybe I should model the largest wrinkles in).

The pants and shoes are just started, but I don't really know what kind of pants I should give him. Do you think some kind of dress pants or something less casual would work ok?

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Old 07 July 2007   #20
good going mate.... althought i would like to pint out something.. first of all the figure seems a bit disproportionate, i donno if its the angle but the upper portion of the body seems bigger then the lower portion... another thing is the head... i think its a bit oo big for a body like that... i donno if u wud like to exagerate anything but if u do u might wanna make the head even smaller to give him that big-guy look.... another thing.. the already mentioned t-shirt issue.

other then that good job on the modeling.. nice work on the muscles... keep up the good works...

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Old 07 July 2007   #21
Modeling: Wireframe



Here is the model with wireframe.
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Old 07 July 2007   #22
hey overcontrast, thanks I see what you mean. I'll do some iterations. And I like the idea for making the head smaller too .


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Old 07 July 2007   #23
looks good man, . his bisep is really big~ ;p, good luck!
 
Old 07 July 2007   #24
Modeling: Body Changes



I changed the proportions a little. The legs are longer, and the head is slightly smaller. :)
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Old 07 July 2007   #25
I think those muscles are slightly too big, especially the chest and the Papaye forearms ... personally I also liked the previous, wider t-shirt opening at the neck, now it looks weird, as if he's inside some suit.

good start though - make him a little dumber looking than he's now
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Old 07 July 2007   #26
Thanks Magdalena Haha, I don't know which collar I like more I'll have to see what works best once he is posed. Hrm, yea maybe he is muscled too much :( His forearms are almost like wings. haha..XD.. Anyways, I will tone everything down (I might keep his chest as it is until it's posed.. his chest should be more flexed once he is in his pose, so the size might work...) .

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Old 07 July 2007   #27
i personally like the bloated muscles he has... i think the new colar is too tight right now..

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Old 07 July 2007   #28
Thanks for the comment
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Old 07 July 2007   #29
Thumbs up Awesome!

Man, your concept rock... it looks so bizarre
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Old 07 July 2007   #30
Haha, thanks man
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