Eon (Trailer) Entry: Jorge Lescale Muciño

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  11 November 2006
Some nice looking stuff going on here. The Lanier model looks awesome (even before the tweaking). I think the Judith model is a little more rough right now, but I can see you're working on it. But she definitely has that scientist look.

Looking forward to seeing your storyboards, etc. Best of luck!
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  11 November 2006
Rough Storyboards or 3D pre-visualization: some base custom design for Lanier

ok..i made this custom for the character i working on...ill start the modeling after detailing this one
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  11 November 2006

cool clothes amigo keep going
  11 November 2006
Lanier model is perfect! even the clothing.About the hoffman...mmh...I think that she may be older.
anyway,well done!

  11 November 2006

great work on lanier. clothing looks great too.
about Judith Hoffman, i just seen its earlyy WIP, so no big crits on her.
I made a few thoughts on the model and hope these points help. just imagined her with a bit harder features, since she's a leading person -a woman of authority and a bit older maybe when i read the book, i had a birdlike character in front of my eye - thou that might have been a deja vue with my nightmarish memories of my english teacher - oxfordish with a th that easily blows out a candle from 25 meters, deadly when in nearrange
To give her harder features, more definition of the cheekbones and jaw/ chin area could help. the nose is highest on the fix list, noseholes could use an extra loop to avoid them to become that big on subdividing, also, that helps the definition of shape. where the nose meets the inner parts of the eye, i miss pits that define the eyesurrounding area, and a greek nose... well maybe a tad bit less of it and give where the nose meets the forehead a bit more volume adjustment too. Lips and eyes could use a bit more definition too, eyes specially on the inner side where the tears get produced, the pit towards the nose, the underlids where they separate eye from cheekarea.
lips, underlips between the chin and the lips around the mouth could use a bit of definition too. if you should deciede on giving her more mature features, the neck could - in manner of harmonizing with the features - use a bit more definition too.
hope that thoughts may be inspiring on your further progresss or having been helpful in any way keep up the great works mates, rock on! :
  01 January 2007
great team here!!

(Sorry I missed this all this time!)

Good luck!
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  01 January 2007
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